All Comments on 'Ms. Hughes Ch. 01'

write more ... how about them doing it in public

Felt like I was right there in the room. I love stories that concentrate on the story and not always the sex. Give me something to think about and that is always more hot.

Somehow I can believe you actually are the socially challenged nerd that you pretend to be and that part of the story rings true. However unless the teacher is just a lush, then her story needs some work. As for the sex .. yes, I can believe that all you know is what you have learned watching porn.

It's really boring to read a story that's based on every other mediocre story with their obligatory eating and sucking before actual sex. Please though buy a spell checker or hire one of your nerd friends to edit your stuff. Thanks.

Oh, yeah. Could we have a story in which the woman doesn't need to get drunk to want to fuck?

Sue

I can truly understand why you want to remain as anonymous as possible.

Found your story pleasant reading. Nice work.

Where is part two?