All Comments on 'Whitewash High Ch. 20'

Of Kelly and Michelle... i think that those are ones that come around like the most developed so far, things with Amanda are going slowly, Val have the boundaries of their relationship well defined, Maya still a enigma. But i like the fact that of all the people was Michelle's husband who put the girl to think.

Good chapter.

Good chapter to the series. Like that you put them out over the summer with a schedule to look forward to. Are you adding a Latino to the harem? In Whitewash League you introduced a Latino woman. And in Subcontinent you said 5 women with a Latino!

@Anon: Was it short? I thought it was at the typical length. Yes, there will be a 5th girl who is a Latina. I’ve just been trying to find a good story reason vs. Shoehorning her in. Glad you noticed that subtle hint in Scandal :)

@Fab: Michelle’s subplot has evolved almost by accident. The hubby was going to be a generic cuckold but whatever reason years ago, I shifted gears and just made a more interesting symbiotic relationship. The Gale subplot, once more fleshed out, might annoy some section of the fan base cause it’s more yakuza stuff. So those who don’t like Rising Sun won’t like her subplot.

I hope Amanda has her cracker gangbang and gets caught by Michelle or Valerie. Always look forward to your next chapters

Don't get Amanda in the harem though she's a high risk low return commodity, what with std and all yeah just get her a gangbang where her husband catches and bursts his veins

I must have miss read the part where Gale is Kelly.

@FSeries: Her full name, 'Kelly Gale', is first mentioned in chapter 4.

I came for the "plot" and stayed for the plot. Very good job in the story and not just the porn.