by Justwords
I imagined I was the woman and orgasmed when she did, the second time. .
I think it could have been fleshed out with more detail, e.g. in the sex scenes. When the adrenaline and dopamine get flowing, time seems to slow down and people notice all sorts of details like things are happening in slow motion. Could have added more immersion with, for example, descriptions of how the monster held her to immobilize her and/or prevent her escape.
But, other than that, I loved it!