by exhibitionistguy
This is a cute little fragment of a story. You could easily flesh it out into a full story. Describe why she became interested in getting naked outdoors, and tell about her first time trying it. Give a lot more detail about what she and the boy do after this beach adventure. Don’t rush through it.
As Anonymous said it's the good shell of a story that begs for more details. Wish I could give it more than 4 stars but it's not deserving of 5.
Needs more details about when they went to his apartment and fucked and how many times they did it.