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Garbage
If you think that group-rape is erotic and that a woman subjected to this, get arroused by it afterwards I strongly advise you to consult a docter.
Good Job
Great story. You did a good job writing it. I am very impressed and I would just like to say to the person who made the previous comment...get a life. You see the topic of the story before you read it and if you find such things troublesome, then read something else. But do not dare impress you prud thoughts on the writer or those who read this work for enjoyment. Be a pain in the ass somplace else. We don't need you here.
Wonderful!
I agree. I think it was well written. I don't understand why the first reader left a comment or even read it if it offended her. Makes no sense.
Great job.
Loved It
Thank you for a well written story, one of me favorite topics (fantasy of mine to watch my wife taken) maybe I will write about it sometime. thanks again
GREAT!
Why would Someone read a non-consent story if they didn't like reading about rape.
Flawless
The first thing that I notice about this story is the brutality. A rape story needs a certain amount of physical force, and you acheived the right balance. Some people don't credit sex with the power that it has. It can control our lives, and make decisions for us. You did a great job at showing that.
Great non-concent story, rough and no remorse
Perfect hot story of gang rape. I like the twist of Diane happily participating in rape in another woman.
like the other commenters, I would like to express my amazement about the complaint from the first person to comment. Give me a break!
Hot?
Not Bad but the ending is unrealistic. Cann't believe anyone could get past being betrayed that way without trying to get revenge.
She liked it
Great story. What a whore.
I like it.
Yep not a bad story, very well written and easy to read.I have been involved in similiar real-life situations and the reluctant ones are the ones that end up loving it. It is a good thing to share your fuck-slut with your mates sometimes.
nonconsent lover turned off by this
I'm female and normally a big fan of some much much more vile stuff ;), but something about this was just distressing instead of arousing... it was just a ridiculous horrible story with some rubbish lazy description thrown in.
Up and down.
I loved the story, as such, twas hot and great. Yummy. Can feel my neither region pounding in tune with my heartbeat etc. But the ending seemed off, it really didn't fit the rest. I just don't see this girl forgiving the rape just because she found sexual satisfaction in it. -- Doesn't make sense in this story. Summa summarum, didn't like the ending, loved the rest so much that it is still a fiver to me ;) (If I read again I can just stop a few lines b4 the end and itll work fine for me!)
Yummmy
I really got off on this story...I would love to be in her position! Nicely written, but the ending could use a bit of work still.
i like it but...
She shouldn't have forgiven him. Sure, he was drunk. But still. He and a bunch of friends raped her?!? She needs a new boyfriend
stranger than fiction
Females regularly are drawn back to guys that treat them incomprehensibly; at least 90% of the ones I know. There was a few holes in the ending much like a really good movie you have to fill in the blanks to make great. Such as how long had it been since it happened, was she or anyone else able to get her self off since, and the big one did she keep it a secret not telling her friends and family. If she did not then the likeliness went way up. Plus no one said she was not planning some sort of revenge (however unlikely).
And yes complaining about this story in this place is like yelling at someone for putting spaceships in their sci-fi story, vampires in their erotic horror or old people in their mature stories.
more please
excellent
please continue
Well Written
I do love well written NASTY and this is top of the line down and dirty!
Nasty Karl
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