All Comments on 'Hypnotism Can Be Fun'

Doesn't have enough length (ironically) to really have

a strong erotic story in it. And, it isn't in the true

spirit of mind control stories.

it must be an illusion, hypnosis cannot change the size of a body part. but for the wife to agree with the husband, they BOTH must have been hypnosised - again on her part.

this is also show by the vanilla flavor she thinks cum tastes....

wonder what else the hypno changed for them? role play? getting turned on by bondage, or "accidental" exhibitionism?

btw, your story could use more character dev, they seem a little 2D right now.

I really liked this story even though it is not the normal heart of mind control, but I like the effort and I think with a little tweaking this could be a good author later on.