All Comments on 'A Kiss Before Dying'

DAMN, That's Hot!!!

all your stories are good---this one was great

that was one of the best stories i have read, i'm still in pure amazment at hoe great that story was,it's going to be hard to beat, but with the way you write you'll write another one better than that.

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God, all of your stories are so good! This one sticks with me though. I was bound and determined to hate you forever and ever when Jenny asked for that kiss before she left the cab. The title of the story crept over the hairs on the back of my neck like a chill wind. LOL

Great writing. I love a happy ending.

(PS. Still love your writing. Keep it up. You're in my Favorites folder ^^)

that was the best story. i couldnt stop reading!!

You really got me there. I was halfway crying when Jenny got shot. But I'm so happy at the end of the story. Thank you again for writing such splendid lesbian love story!

Not just another rip 'em off and get stuck in tale, far from it. A real tear jerk-er of a love story, with the perfect ending. Well done.

Aw! I found that quite touching but also highly erotic... Any plans to write more about these two?

i cried when i found out jenny was shot!!

there love is so pure its a perfect ending to a day of hell!

Jenny deserved her happiness since they Killed Roberta and in the end she got her happiness her glory her lover

THIS STORY IT HAS EVERYTHING FROM ROMANCE TO EXPLODING BIG FINISH

i enjoyed this story n i felt as if i was there like everything was goin on in my head i just loved it i simply loved it there is no other way to explain it u r truely gifted n i hope there is a chapter 2 on this story becuz i really wanna know how there lives turned out

a truely wonderful story, from first word to ending word

What a different storyline, thank you for sharing this with us all. I loved it. I am speechless and my heart is throbbing wishing I could have been either of them myself.

I expected Jenny to die when Jesse said "you should ask questions when you GOT the chance."

Was pleasantly surprised when she survived!

This is the first story of yours that I've read, Lisa, and I'll certainly be reading more. It is well-written and enjoyable---my one criticism would be that it seemed a little too short, or rather perhaps a bit abrupt at the end. It's always a great pleasure on this site to find someone who can write well (and spell and use punctuation correctly!) and who builds up a plot rather than just leaping straight into the sex. You're worth every one of the five stars I've given you. As for the story's title, Ira Levin beat you to that by about 50-something years but I suppose not too many people will remember that.

You have enough lingering questions that you could write the other chapter.

Erotic Noir?

Enjoyed this very much, maybe it could be a movie with Meg Tilly!

5 stars.

Beautiful love story, very well crafted! Thank you

Been back for this extreme touching lovely beautiful dramatic tale ..... Enchanting

Great story. Loved the twist at the end.

Didn't think you could tell that story in ten thousand words. I just knew it would flag at the end.

But you did an admirable job!

Thanks.

What a wonderful story, made it 5* by the happy ending,,

Well done and a marvelous work. Enjoyed for the first time, reading a work where the author did not butcher the English language. Usually there are several instances of for example, an author using shutter (a window covering) instead of shudder (a tremor or quiver) to describe intense sexual feelings.

A well crafted story with the wonderful twist at the end, Kudos and of course 5 stars.