A slut to her Master

A Rather Arousing Debut ;-)

I particularly like the phrase "raping me" - a phrase virtually never used in describing consentual sexual activity, but it sets the perfect tone for the anal sex that ends the tale.

Sweet surrender

And all the while there was "a primal, visceral look in your eyes." Excellent submission story, I hope you write more soon xxx

Tantalisingly close to brilliant...

This is one excellent story. And I mean excellent. And not just for a debut either. It is not without a couple of minor grammatical flaws, but God, some of the imagery and subtle descriptions of the intenseness that is the power exchange were tantalising. Powerfully hot sex scenes follow in mounting fervour. This is close to brilliant.

Further evidence that the BDSM category is coming of age.

SN

What can i add?

Those before me have said it all, i can only concur....wonderful story! Your grasp of the feelings and use of powerful descriptions is a welcome and refreshing change...i look forward to more intensly erotic and intelligently written stories from you. Thank You for sharing with us. Excellent, just simply excellent.

Good

The I/you format is a bit difficult to read, but overall good work.

Powerful writing

What a debut! Powerful, concentrated and totally erotic.

excellant

Great story, very telling of your personal desires.

very hot

Hot story and hotter picture! More, more, more!

Wonderful story, truly captured the feelings ones such as us have.

made my pussy wet.