All Comments on 'Coney'

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Horny_YogiHorny_Yogialmost 6 years ago
Well done 😊

I have read a number of period-set stories but this one is by far the best. I really felt part of the story and could easily visualise the surroundings. Exceptionally well written and I certainly look forward to seeing what other works you can create. Great job 😉

DDanielsDDanielsalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks, Yogi!

Your comment is quite the compliment!!

gunhilltraingunhilltrainalmost 6 years ago
Wonderful historical details and a great story.

Unfortunately I didn't see Coney Island until it was well past its prime in the 1960s. Steeplechase was the last of the big parks to close around 1964.

DDanielsDDanielsalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks Gunhilltrain!

I appreciate the compliment on the story. It means a lot!

lgustosmiolgustosmioover 3 years ago

Read it again, just as good, exciting, and enjoyable as the first time. Still a beautiful tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So well placed in history, so original

I love reference to The Awakening! I also love that her experiences are so honest! Like this man smells like a swamp but I'll deal since I probably don't smell like a bouquet either! 10/10

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