All Comments on 'Sexy Mandy and Nikki Do the Bagboys'

If a bit unrealistic. I get the risk factor in public sex, but a more secluded setting-around the back of the building, or off in a corner, would work better. And, please, learn how to use an apostrophe....."mom's....orgasm's.....finger's." Those are all plurals, and do not get one. It's a minor point, but getting the grammar details correct makes the story read a lot easier. All that said, I'm looking forward to the boys banging and sperming those two married sluts.

I apologize for bad punctuation..needs editor....The boy's get a chance to slam those peckers in Mandy and Nikki's bums..while Jimmy's mom eats the creamy desert..

I think this deserves another chapter

Rough, crude and raw! Loved it! The dialogue created a raunchy image of two whores, the kind of women I dream of meeting!

As crazy as this story is I got caught up in the action. Hopefully Jimmy's mother will get an afternoon she'll never forget.

No one uses whom in a sex story. 'Who had

Your or you're yep you need to buck up on the grammar.

Pure filth but written like 14 Yr old.

Anonymous once again you got to the point..Yes didn't have Grammarly back then but still, I think I was jacking off like a 14-year-old when I wrote it..no excuse..but yes pure filth...Mandy of Southern Charms said the same thing..she loved it.. Check my other stories I can take criticism..