The first guy should have kept her and knocked her up!!!
I really enjoyed your series. You kept the sex short and to the point and this let the story still get told.
Now I think the wife might want to do something "special" to make her man want her enough to never stray again.
You left it keeping me wondering... really well done.
gud story...luv all da parts 2 dis stories!
This story basically is portraying women as a piece of meat. You don't even think that those women (girls) are someones friend, sister, and/or daughter. Just look at them as if they are here only for our satisfaction. Stupid, stupid, story. It seems like something one will find at a porn place.
What a great fantasy!! Some domination rough sex was a great story. Hope to read many more
i tried to get in to it.. i tried so very hard to get into it. the story had so much potential but the execution was shit, bad descriptions, jumpy story line blugh. i was an 18 yr old school girl 2 yrs ago and always had the older man forced upon me fantasy but i think u just ruined it
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