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please edit your work
...before you submit it...I stopped reading your story after the 3rd "starring"
Very poor
Maybe your story was good but I didn't finish it because your spelling and English usage was so poor.
Why don't you read your work before expecting us to do so?
You insult us with such poorly presented writing.
i loved this story,,,
i loved this story despite a few spelling errors,,,, more story please
Sexy
Never you mind those negative comments. Your story line is very hot! Keep up the good work!
wow
I loved it thought it was short and i wanted it to go more indepth .. i loved how he said show me this .. and that.. wow.. i could cum right here
Wrong catagory--THIS IS RAPE
Of a daughter by her father.
I want to cum
I want me and my daddy to do that.
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