All Comments on 'Daughters of the Rising Sun'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
More please

I love this kind of story..please do some more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Fab!!

Loved the story... More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Miska & Ai enjoyed it very much

Great story - any name for the male character?

Please write new parts with Miska & your "MATE" and of course the two girls need to gether with him as well.

Miska can move into the house and all live happy.

Moonm8Moonm8about 19 years ago
Loved it!

Great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not really interesting or realistic

For one, the names aren't japanese. Ai, by itself, means love. It isn't a normal Japanese name, same goes for Miska, which sounds more Russian than anything else... Try Meiko, Reika, or something like that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice effort

Nice 'first'? effort (I didn't see any other submissions). Miska does sound a bit Russian tho...your a bit emotionally distant. Maybe you should try adding a bit of passion. btw I noticed in the comments that someone thought Ai only meant love. My wife's name is Ai and she assures me there are many many more Japanese women with the same name out there. Hope you give it another go sometime.

fallfromtreesfallfromtreesabout 15 years ago
Ai not Japanese?

"Anonymous in USA" said Ai is not a Japanese name. Yes it means "love", but what planet or country did he come from? Ai is a quite common name for a girl in Japan. I lived there for 5 years, working as an English teacher at the college level in diverse cities, such as Kobe, Wakayama, Kurashiki and Takamatsu, and had many co-workers and a few friends named Ai, all of whom had the Kanji for "love" for their first name.

And Miska... yes, there is no name ever in Japan like this. Sounds Russian to me dude, too. Misako, Masako, Sakiko, Michiko.... get the drift? "ko" is commonly used for women's names and the Kanji translate liter

Otherwise, the story is lovely; however, I would love additions to this story!

fallfromtreesfallfromtreesabout 15 years ago
Ai not Japanese?

"Anonymous in USA" said Ai is not a Japanese name. Yes it means "love", but what planet or country did he come from? Ai is a quite common name for a girl in Japan. I lived there for 5 years, working as an English teacher at the college level in diverse cities, such as Kobe, Wakayama, Kurashiki and Takamatsu, and had many co-workers and a few friends named Ai, all of whom had the Kanji for "love" for their first name.

And Miska... yes, there is no name ever in Japan like this. Sounds Russian to me dude, too. Misako, Masako, Sakiko, Michiko.... get the drift? "ko" is commonly used for women's names and the Kanji translate liter

Otherwise, the story is lovely; however, I would love additions to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

That was really enjoyable! I kick myself every time I see japanese girls for getting married before I had the oportunity to hookup with a few! :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Oh, to have cute Japanese girls in my past! If I could turn back the clock I'd divert all the money I spent drinking and smoking (a bloody awful lot!) and apply it to as many asian country vacations as I could manage! Better yet, couch surfing with hotties to save money and stretch my stay time ;). ...aaah youth, a candle burned too fast...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great start...more please!!!

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