All Comments on 'Domestic Wife Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Wonderful second chapter! I love his slow but firm, gentle but dominant treatment of his innocent wife. I'm looking forward to more of your writing!

Dry_opinionDry_opinionover 5 years ago
Cutting chapters

In the 1st chapter characters were beginning to learn about each others personalities, Darcy's learning to read process was started, glimpses of the relationship back-story were present, hints for the future events were presented.

This chapter is a single sex scene. None of the listed elements of the 1st chapter are mentioned.

I'm giving 4 stars not because of the quality of writing, but because of the abrupt transition between chapters.

curioustimcurioustimover 4 years ago
amazing....

what a great story of gentle seduction.... so willing....mmmmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yessss!

Loving this! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

what a romantic and gentle way of grooming a sub wow

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