by pinkcandy99
Wonderful second chapter! I love his slow but firm, gentle but dominant treatment of his innocent wife. I'm looking forward to more of your writing!
In the 1st chapter characters were beginning to learn about each others personalities, Darcy's learning to read process was started, glimpses of the relationship back-story were present, hints for the future events were presented.
This chapter is a single sex scene. None of the listed elements of the 1st chapter are mentioned.
I'm giving 4 stars not because of the quality of writing, but because of the abrupt transition between chapters.
what a great story of gentle seduction.... so willing....mmmmmmm