All Comments on 'The Slap'

This inspired a story of my own...think i'll post it soon.

Wonderful,electric,erotic and powerful!

This story is fantastic. Very well written. Very hot!

Well-paced, well-timed, and toasty.

Raw, passionate and a little dark but all about love. I adored it. I adored the last line, it just left me with a warm after glow.

Find yourself an editor, or learn how to edit on your own. One or the other.

This story is great--very raw, very rough, very hot. You may want to go over it a little more, but I'm glad to see such great ideas and content. Post more!

but what a rush.just who was fuckin who?

Loved the story I felt like I was there- love having that done!

not worth trying to read

No.

Safeword.

Packed suitcase.

Number blocked.

Well and intensely written for those who are into the rough.