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Ode to Jean

byRonnie Wachuka©
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by Anonymous

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by cookiejar03/01/05

Beautiful

I dream of being loved like this. Maybe someday...:)

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by ~hellbaby~04/07/05

(Wiping away a tear)

This is a beautiful poem besides a lovely tribute. How blessed to have known a love that so few ever will. Thanks for the touching words

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by Bridget6904/07/05

Touching.

A very heartfelt tribute to a lifelong love.

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Lovely

Lovely and thank you. DC

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by Anonymous09/15/05

Simply Beautiful!

This was so beautiful. What a wonderful tribute to your wife, your love! Thank you for sharing this with all of us!

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by 10/21/05

I'm not much

for poetry but that made me shed a tear. A beautiful piece of work.

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by sack10/30/05

very effective..

because it's straight from the heart! Very moving!

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by windwriter11/21/05

eloquent and...

...thoughtfully worded. Sometimes poems are simply that, words.

Merriam-Webster says...writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm.

You stirred my emotions through your profound love for your wife via your pen. Thank you for reminding me that love exists.

Respectfully,
windwriter

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by Anonymous02/04/06

What a blessing

To find a love that lasts for a lifetime!

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by john-the-author03/20/06

Lovely, Ronnie!

Very moving, Ronnie. Thanks!

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by GoddessOfSouls08/17/06

Beautiful Soul

What a beautiful tribute to your love, leaves me speachless, a rare gift that is.. THANK YOU for sharing

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by Anonymous01/13/17

Bloody Hell.

The poem is probably the best I have read on here. AND one of the best I have read anywhere. Only the variety of poems, epics. tales, odes descriptive etc is the reason for the "one of the best".
I lost my wife 16 years ago and I wish I had written that poem
.
Thank you

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