The Love of My Life

sweet

great story, couldn't help but feeled a bit teary eyed toward the end...

you put in words what life is like, nice and sweet, but with bits of sorrow as well...

keep up the great work, hope to see more of your writings!

Love and tears

Wow! sounds like an appeal for 'only one partner.'
Excellent, touching story.
Lukas

Wow!

Your story was so sweet!! It was nice to read something that had a real sense of a story, and such a bitter sweet story it is!! Please keep writing more like these!

Amazing

I truly enjoyed reading this story. It had a very personal feel to it and that's why I think it's erotic. That someone, a man, would share that deeply, mmmm sends tingles along my body. I hope you write more.

Memories

Loved this story Eric...How wonderful to know such a love even for a brief shining moment of time.

Nice work!

It is amazing to me how we cast aside some memories and others keep the past alive. Your story makes me wonder if somewhere out there someone might still love me, without my knowlege. Perhaps she wonders how I am and is still concerned for my well being, while at the same time I have given her no thought in ages. I wonder if the woman I remember still thinks of me, or if she has forgotten.
This was a wonderful story and It made me re-examine my place in others' hearts and how love knows no limits.

sweet and honest

It was a good story -but it's funny that after telling the main carachter 'A girl who doesn't swallow her man's cum doesn't deserve to enjoy his cock', she soon got 'bored' with him. It sounds like a line used to ruin a lover -a mind fuck if you will and apparently it worked on the poor guy. Definately bittersweet.

Teenage love

We all remember our first time, don't we? I suppose for most, it is a treasured memory, as it was in this story. Sadly they didn't stay together. I enjoyed the story, though.

.... That was terrible. Seriously, just messed up and I feel lousy.