Hi, enjoyed your recollection or fantasy?...and Ponsonby reference brought a smile to my eyes, being from the same city. x nzemuse
Excellently paced tale. Very consistent. Venus96 is an excellent writer and has a good understanding of the self-discipline required for submission. Keep up the good work. Marc
This was beautifully and masterfully written. It entranced me! Well done and thank you! Ny
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slow sensual sweet sin
Hi, enjoyed your recollection or fantasy?...and Ponsonby reference brought a smile to my eyes, being from the same city.
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nzemuse
Very good work!
Excellently paced tale. Very consistent. Venus96 is an excellent writer and has a good understanding of the self-discipline required for submission.
Keep up the good work.
Marc
amazing
This was beautifully and masterfully written. It entranced me! Well done and thank you!
Ny
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