by Kelly M.
what an extremely hot story. i am dripping myself after reading it. more please!!!!!
O my wow. I soooo loved this story. I straight went to the bathroom at my job n had to masterbate....
I was leaking my pussy juice all over my panties when I read this story. I would just love to be her bitch as well
This story made me laugh out loud. It was so idiotic! There was nothing sexy or hot about it.
this is about the worst story I read on here so far, I skipped about half of it I wonder if she gets her back in chapter 2
Assuming it would work - which it wouldn't - the most likely ending is that she would get a brain and go to another hypnotist and get deprogrammed, and then take a very large axe and make a house call on a certain someone.
I can hardly believe that somebody would write something that pathetically stupid
Well, I still had fun reading it.
Still, not a fan of abuse at all. Don't see anything sexy in it.
This is such a clever story. Well done, it's wonderful.
And I'm a fine conuseir of lesbian stories. This hits on many different levels. I know it's been pulled from elsewhere. I'm surprised we can't get an author or two to expand on the conversion and perversion of young women into wanton lesbian dykes
Domination isn't my thing but creativity and imagination is, I don't know how people get off on humiliation but I find it appalling because of the gross activities. Why degrade a person to such a despicable low level when sexual pleasure should be enjoyed with pure intimacy and sensuality with a high degree of romanticism? But I guess it is what it is.
This is the best lesbian story ever written. If you have any others that even get close please link to them.
This had a good start. A creative dilemma but it then turned into a regular whore, slut, bitch typical story.