All Comments on 'Collateral Ch. 11'

This story is so addicting! I love it!!!

Through the story I have felt it deserved a 3 or 3.5 but this chapter especially the second half took you over the top. Bravo 5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 💫

...’If I don’t hate you, it will only mean that none of this was real’... and that was the moment I fell in love with Jake. Maybe Klaus did too. Gees, you can write! This site isn’t much for slow build ups, but I am. I see your ratings going up as the sex gets hotter. I, for one, have 5** you all along. Keep the chapters coming!

The sex was kinda weird (maybe i dont know that much about sex) but the emotions are intensifying nicely :))) kinda feel like there will be a lot ahead to morph this story into an end.... been following this story from the start and 5🌟-ed all the way

I really want to know all that happens next.

-fritt

Just to be clear...for your readers mainly.

If you are going to be adamant about tests and 'clean sex", you sould bag it for blowjobs...the entire time. Kissing is dangerous too. Swollen gum, tooth scratches during, biting, blood of any kind...safe sex is harder than than it sounds...it is messy.

And there it is, Jake not only thinks and feels, he cares!