All Comments on 'Glass Eyes'

by angiquesophie

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sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 5 years ago
Strange!

Erotic Horror isn't usually my thing, but I enjoyed this.

Just a minor nitpick. The mannequin was thrown out, in the dumpster - why should he have to pay for it?

GirlintheMoonGirlintheMoonover 5 years ago
Dark and disturbing.

I LOVED it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SO disappointing

I usually like your stories, but I was disappointed to see your choice was erotic horror for your July 4th posting. I was right. This wasn't entertaining in the least.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thanks for sharing...

“Sometimes It’s better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all”

Are we men nothing more than planetary rotations around our suns?

Thanks for a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So, where is the nautical theme?! 🌊🏝🏖⛵️⚓️🛳🏄🏼‍♀️🏊🏻‍♀️🛁🚰☔️💦💧💧💧

At least let him take a piss on that Mannequin.

No doubt you can write and pretty good too. We like or hate your stories, there is Nothing in between... till today. 🤔

BasicSaidaBasicSaidaover 5 years ago
He was captured by a Siren’s song

It was too late for him from the moment he heard it. Very dark and very enjoyable. Thank you!

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 5 years ago
This was a very good story

I do not visit erotic horror often, but your story called me over. And I'm glad it did.

angiquesophieangiquesophieover 5 years agoAuthor
thanks, matt

i guess that is what sirens do (smile)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thanks for the effort, . . .

but the sex life of a mentally ill person is not interesting, nor erotic.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Damn what a let down, great author, nothing positive about this work...

Save brevity.

Raisa_GreywoodRaisa_Greywoodover 5 years ago
Nice!

Glad to see I wasn't the only one to go with erotic horror for this event. :)

aptonthe503aptonthe503over 5 years ago
Very Interesting

Though this is outside my norm, I found it fascinating, it just drew me in, sort of like the mannequin did Nathan!

Very well done.

Thank you for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It has most of the qualities of an old episode of...

...The Twighlight Zone.

I imagine it being on tv in black and white, a brief intro by Rod Serling and the story unfolding from there to this trapped tragedy at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Re: "It has most of the qualities of an old episode of... ...The Twilight Zone."

Absolutely. I agree. It sails right past disconcerting and into weird but in a good way. I got the feeling that next he would start washing, dressing and feeding it. It could easily have gone in a Vincent Price "House of Wax" direction.

Thanks angiquesophie for a interesting read.

maninconnmaninconnover 5 years ago
Dear angiquesophie

You are so good, you take my breath away with every story.

Your fan,

maninconn

angiquesophieangiquesophieover 5 years agoAuthor
thank you so much, maninconn,

you make me blush. i do hope you don't

go breathless for too long. would hate to lose a fan.

etchiboyetchiboyover 3 years ago
Brilliant!!!

Bravo!!!

Wow-wee!!!

5-stars & Favorite

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Extremely well done. Your soliloquy on myth was one for this age.

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