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by duddle14612/23/06

freedom.

A trapped Soul looks to the people in her life to furnish a way of escape. She delves into their life ~ to salvage her own. Lovely illustration overlay compliments this rendering.

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by LeBroz02/03/07

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There's more here than meets the eye. Of a person desperate in her depression and questions of self-worth. How far will she go to escape?

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by LeBroz02/03/07

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There's more here than meets the eye. Of a person desperate in her depression and questions of self-worth. How far will she go to escape?

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by jthserra02/16/11

very good

excellent use of words, photograph and fonts to emphasize imprisonment.


jth : )

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by tazz31701/17/12

TO BUST FREE

is not an escape or a repieve. TK U MLJ LV NV

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