4 Seasons of a Life Ch. 01

I liked it!

Keep it going, I would love to see next chapter(s)!

THX

John from Budapest

write the next chapter

great story

Waiting for Season 2

Good start! Well written and erotic. It takes me back to when I was 18 (I think I can remember back that far).

A "Story Teller"

Author, I am so appreciative of your efforts and hope you can continue these stories of yours.

I hope others will take the time to read your other offerings if they haven't already. I know they will enjoy them as I did! The themes are an important part of your appeal - they are realistic and not cruel or demented.

I am sure you are writting for pleasure and have some experience in this medium due to your expertise. It appears to me that you could do well for yourself in a novel should you decide to do so. But first things first. Selfishly, I hope that we have to endure(ha) your efforts for a while as you polish your skills and until you decide to publish something longer, more challenging and financially rewarding.

Until then, your talent, imagination, wit and efforts are greatly appreciated!!! With Best Regards

GREAT JOB

Can not wait for the other seasons. BROVO

Very Very EROTIC>>>>

Great piece of innocent erotica...But I wonder what would have happened to poor David if it hadn't started raining :-)

very good stuff

Beats the heck outa my 1st experience. We had a cat get under the fold-out bed and start screaming to get out while I was making love to the young lady in question. Far less romantic! This was a beautiful scenario, Sir. I cannot wait to see where it goes from here.

So hot!