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Fab!!!!! Erotic & more...
Goldeniangel:
This story gets better and better - as does your thematic writing and the character development of Allison. I don't know how long you plan to make this novella or a novel ... but it is wonderful!
Plus, though I know you are chronicologically *not* very old, but this: "No, Allison wanted something more than that. She wanted someone who swept her up off her feet and made her feel like a princess. Someone that made her temperature rise, feed the heat between her legs. Moving quickly, sure, confident in what he wanted. Passion, pure and unadulterated, heady fever that made people do the most ridiculous things. A man who pushed her boundaries, who took her to places she'd never been before, who could ignite cravings in her body and feed the constant hunger." and "All she knew was that Roger would never be able to fulfill what she needed, and Todd might. The only possible future between her and the man who was moaning on top of her, spending his seed in her body, was deception, jealousy and misery. It made her feel very sad, and a bit sluttish... but she was also coming to understand that people change and that there was no sin in that. What would be a sin would be continuing things with Roger." ... shows great maturity of thought and emotion.
That is something that most people never figure out and end up staying with who they are with - mostly out of fear and inertia.
I also like that instead of just waiting for Chad to get hard and go again ... she said, "Next time Todd is in town...."
Great job & can't wait for more!!!!!
alex
Awesome!!!!
Every chapter seems to take an unexpected twist, and I love it.
To anon: How does it feel to be a spineless, and most probably impotent ass and hide behind the veil of anonymity. If you don't like the stories why do you read them?
Great!
These stories are absolutely wonderful...I particularly like the very unexpected fact that the characters (Allison and Todd) share my name and my boyfriend's. It makes it more entertaining.
WOW!
Your stories keep getting better. I click on literotica just to see what stories you have added for Allison.
New TOYS are the best!
Don't you just LOVE a new toy!!
great!! Stimulating erotica darling!!
Kisses,
T
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