All Comments on 'It's Just a Business Transaction Ch. 03'

he just asked why he would. obvious distraction.

she did not carefully read the contract. is this character that dumb?

the sex and babies discussion was not at all clear to me, so .....

Nice twist! This story just keeps getting better,it's wonderful and passionate and it keeps you guessing. I can't wait to read the next part.Thank you,I'm so happy to have discovered such a talented writting

I enjoy your storylines and the characters are believable, however the switching between tenses makes it very hard to concentrate on the actual plot. Please consider making use of the editors here!

Horrendous grammar!

It was almost impossible to read!

I really wanted to just c/p the whole thing and edit it while I read so that I might have the chance to enjoy it the second time round. Such a shame too since it's a very interesting story. You get a 50 because it's a fantastic story but the grammar (especially tense) lets it down, more than any story I've read on this site. I'm not an editor but please, please get one. <3 αιηє