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Work on spelling and grammar!!!
MMMhmm
I can see where this is going, or at least CAN go. I will be interested in further episodes. I think the big boss has to take an interest, but hopefully not at the expense of his young driver (at least, not TOO much expense). And yes please, work on grammar.
weird
I think that this story was a most strange romance story. The way that you wrote it was choppy and lacking emotional feeling. I hope that if you do write sequel to this story you would become more personal with the story.
Just Think!!!!
I liked your story. Sometimes you just have to live outside the box. The best and sometimes not so great happenings are escapades that just happen when you let go and follow through. Don't worry about the spelling, I liked it and want to read more of you. Just found you a couple of stories before and I plan to read all of you. Thanks D.
No beginning, middle, ending. It seemed very incompleted to me.
This just seemed a bit pointless for a stand alone story. anon jerry
a very odd tale
she sounds a real fuck slut but as long as she gets cock and no one cheats then OK....
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