All Comments on 'It's Everything'

A short piece that describes feelings and mood very well. I love the tag "porn without plot", especially attached to the "romance" tag. Romantic porn should be a category,or at least an aspiration. Nicely done 5*

Short but sexy and super effective. Offers an immediacy you don't often get without it being told in 2nd person (which I hate, lol).

Sensual, evocative, deeply descriptive and yeah, romantic in a nice raw, elemental way.

Very well done. I'm a fan.

Hot and sweet.

I love the way you described the objects around them and focus on body parts other than the obvious. It really sets a sensual scene. This is some top drawer smut. LOL

Wonderful! I really liked this.

Very nice

.... for the memories. My ex-GF would text me, sometimes days later, about how sore she still was (in a good way, of course) after one of our couplings. It was so exciting to be on top of her, slowly penetrating her inch by inch, waiting for her to nod to me to signify that "yes, Darling, my pussy has adjusted to your huge, hard cock, so you can fuck me hard now". It was difficult for her to walk afterward. Sweet, sexy times. Thanks again!

nothing special. it's fantastic! slap hapy papy #9