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by Anonymous

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by Bill Dada03/04/05

I don't usually comment...

...on poems that I don't give a 100 to. I don't feel qualified enough to offer any suggestions to make them better. The same applies here, but there are some lines that are so powerful that I felt I had to aknowledge them. They are:

'My passion casting
Shadows on the wall'

'Like a thundercloud
Battling a tornado
In the middle of a raging river'

'and feel the darkness roll back..'

I loved these lines, but the rest seemed like a different poem.

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by JustSkye09/17/05

Such words...

My my my. How very evocative and erotic.

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