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wAITING FOR MORE
Very good start and left waiting for more.
What a splendid start!
This story is off to a wonderful start! Please hurry with more!
Great!
Awesome start..please continue!
fabulous
I love the first 2 chapters, keep them coming! :D
really novel stuff
this story needs to be published in a novel. its awesome,and u, sir, have a great talent.
This should be under humor and satire!
Wow, this seems to be following the typical pirate capture the wench and seduce her, but this time the wench is male!
There are paragraphs inserted to explain the female captain, but the physical interactions between the captain and the "wench" were not modified from their original male captain and female wench templates enough.
I mean seriously, playing with a man's chest and not knowing the man's arousal until she slides her hands up his thighs has been keeping me in stitches!
Good read, but just not believable if this story is meant to arouse anything other than laughter.
ignore that abovementioned comment
That poster is obnoxious. See if s/he can write a better story.
good job
I really like the story, whether it can be real or not does not matter to me, it's well written and a good idea for a story.
The only thing that does not sound 'proper', but I may be wrong, is how often a pirate captain would say 'please'. It seems a little too often but I must not forget she is was a very educated lady before turning into a pirate.
Needless to say, I am jumping right at ch. 02. :)
5 Stars!!!
Opels You Rock...🙌
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