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Honest
This is not the same caliber as your other writing. The title establishes a theme of word exploration, but you offer a string of cliches.
You have a nice idea, here; do it justice.
flyguy
Addicted to words
You are such an addict.. I wonder if they have a twelve step program for logophiles.. :)
Form
The form of the Goddess, spelled out in words.. While I agree there could have been more word exploration, I like the way you've packaged it. Keep it up!
Disagree
I have to disagree with Flyguy's comment. I suspect he missed the visual. Well done.
Very nice...
...haven't seen an example of concrete poetry in quite awhile. Being that the words are in the form of the Goddess, they aren't cliches, but prayers. I beleive I'll get on my knees and pray.
:) --- Smile
Not only did I have a picture in my head....but I had a picture as I scrolled the words!
~Honey
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