All Comments on 'First Encounter Pt. 02'

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kiteareskitearesalmost 6 years ago
Tender

Not sure why this part is so much lower that the 1st, I thought it was better.

Love that there are tender moments between the climaxes where he takes care of her and that he is attentive to even a weak tug on his cuff.

Looking forward to the next part, which would be my only criticism, you possibly should have held back and released more than a single page at a time.

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