Just when I think you cannot get any better you come out with a story such as this. If any of these stories are even half true, you have been very blessed. Your female characters are very interesting, not to mention adventurous.
Again, thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous03/13/05
wow!
Incredible. Thank YOU!
by
Anonymous03/13/05
Superb
That was an amazing story, the best I have read here. I actually came back and read it a few times. Thanks
by
Anonymous03/14/05
Crumbs
Well Mr watts had his cookies and crumpit and crumbs
Loved it.....
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Anonymous03/14/05
hooray for thin mints!
i wonder if emily found a table or platform for him to eat his cookies and drink his milk from?
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Anonymous03/14/05
Incredibly erotic and fun too!
This story is simply delightful in every way. Please introduce me to Emily, because she is great!
Could it get any better? Hell no! This story with role play can give us all ideas and the mental pictures you created with your writing were all in hdtv!!!! Just absolutely superb! I look forward to more entertaining stories from you! Please!
Your fan!
Sexmate
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Anonymous03/14/05
This is an unforgettable story
I'm going to print this out, because it's a keeper. Funny and erotic.
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Anonymous03/15/05
Cookie Mom
As a troop "Cookie Mom" who also happens to be pretty hot, I had a really good time reading this story. Definately got the juices moving. Wonder how many boxes I could sell?
This was a great story!! I loved Emily and the role she played so well. And the heat of the moment was terribly hot!!! I would love to meet a cookie Mom like her! I'd have a year round supply of GS cookies every year!!!
I love your writing. You take care to build your scene and characters, which makes the difference between erotica and pornography. I'm looking forward to reading more about Emily.
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Anonymous03/15/05
back to back door to door
cheapskate!!A performance like that would certainly be worth at least 15 boxes!!!!
This was an amazing story. The anticipation, the tease, the buildup... all of this leading to earth shaking climaxes for the both of you... wasn't sure i could handle an anal story, but this has given me new ideas.. keep up the good work.
Emily is a very interesting and erotic person. She is not afraid to experiment in the bedroom. The way you write of her exploits, it is like being in the rrom watching it happen. I am sorry I didn't give my comment on the first two chapters, because they were also good reads.
Emily is a very interesting and erotic person. She is not afraid to experiment in the bedroom. The way you write of her exploits, it is like being in the rrom watching it happen. I am sorry I didn't give my comment on the first two chapters, because they were also good reads.
by
Anonymous04/17/05
Best Story Telling Ever
I think the subject says it all. Great character development, fun dialog, great sex. Your stories have it all. Keep on writing.
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Anonymous04/17/05
Loved it
Looks like my wife and I will be digging out her old uniform again tonight ;)
WOW! One of the best stories on here! Period! Now I have to read more from you!
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Anonymous01/13/06
Super
If you're not writing professionally, you should consider it. Great character development, wonderful dialogue, and superior action. I could almost feel the heat.
Keep it up.
Mr. Watts has excellent taste in both women and wine, white zinfandel washed down with a cute blonde has got to be a favourite. Although it has to be said that blackmailing himself out of cookies was probably not the wisest of choices, besides, cookies are good, why not buy 15 boxes?
Great story anyway, uber-hot! Keep writing!
Great story! And the best part is Mr. Watts didn't just do it all for the cookie ~ he truly enjoys the church girl. Sweet and dirty always go better together. Thanks for posting this. Gonna have to go read your other work now!
English
well done!
I truly enjoy your style of writing!
I can't believe it
Just when I think you cannot get any better you come out with a story such as this. If any of these stories are even half true, you have been very blessed. Your female characters are very interesting, not to mention adventurous.
Again, thanks for sharing.
wow!
Incredible. Thank YOU!
Superb
That was an amazing story, the best I have read here. I actually came back and read it a few times. Thanks
Crumbs
Well Mr watts had his cookies and crumpit and crumbs
Loved it.....
hooray for thin mints!
i wonder if emily found a table or platform for him to eat his cookies and drink his milk from?
Incredibly erotic and fun too!
This story is simply delightful in every way. Please introduce me to Emily, because she is great!
unbelieveably HOT!
Could it get any better? Hell no! This story with role play can give us all ideas and the mental pictures you created with your writing were all in hdtv!!!! Just absolutely superb! I look forward to more entertaining stories from you! Please!
Your fan!
Sexmate
This is an unforgettable story
I'm going to print this out, because it's a keeper. Funny and erotic.
Cookie Mom
As a troop "Cookie Mom" who also happens to be pretty hot, I had a really good time reading this story. Definately got the juices moving. Wonder how many boxes I could sell?
Great story!
This was a great story!! I loved Emily and the role she played so well. And the heat of the moment was terribly hot!!! I would love to meet a cookie Mom like her! I'd have a year round supply of GS cookies every year!!!
Keep up the good work
I love your writing. You take care to build your scene and characters, which makes the difference between erotica and pornography. I'm looking forward to reading more about Emily.
back to back door to door
cheapskate!!A performance like that would certainly be worth at least 15 boxes!!!!
Right, I agree- a cheapskate
That's exactly what I was thinking at the end of the story.
Cookie Mom, catch the man of the house home alone and you could sell 20 boxes per house, easy!!
Excellent
Nicely written... very nice, well thought out...
WoW!!!
Suddenly I'm in the mood for a box of cookies.
Great !!!!
Want to add my voice to the others that think your writing is excellent. Keep up the good work.
scrumpdillyumpshus!!!
This was an amazing story. The anticipation, the tease, the buildup... all of this leading to earth shaking climaxes for the both of you... wasn't sure i could handle an anal story, but this has given me new ideas.. keep up the good work.
Dynamite Cookies and Cream
Erotic and humorous. A tough combination to pull off but you succeeded. Likable characters, believable action and a bang-bang climax.
You Silly Cookie Monster
What a great touch author - applause applause !!!!
By all means, please keep on keeping on - You are one of the best here - entertaining us and arousing us sensually but not crudely.
With high Regard
Author what a way to go
Emily is a very interesting and erotic person. She is not afraid to experiment in the bedroom. The way you write of her exploits, it is like being in the rrom watching it happen. I am sorry I didn't give my comment on the first two chapters, because they were also good reads.
Author what a way to go
Emily is a very interesting and erotic person. She is not afraid to experiment in the bedroom. The way you write of her exploits, it is like being in the rrom watching it happen. I am sorry I didn't give my comment on the first two chapters, because they were also good reads.
Best Story Telling Ever
I think the subject says it all. Great character development, fun dialog, great sex. Your stories have it all. Keep on writing.
Loved it
Looks like my wife and I will be digging out her old uniform again tonight ;)
I LOVED THIS !!!
I loved this ... your presentation was great ! GO Emily !!!
omg
This is the best I have EVER read.
Speechless
INCREDIBLE! Thank you!
I'm speechless!
WOW! One of the best stories on here! Period! Now I have to read more from you!
Super
If you're not writing professionally, you should consider it. Great character development, wonderful dialogue, and superior action. I could almost feel the heat.
Keep it up.
Great story!
Great job!
WOWWW
This is one of the best stories Ive seen here.. Great job mate.. would love to see you writing more. GREATT.
Nice Choice!
Mr. Watts has excellent taste in both women and wine, white zinfandel washed down with a cute blonde has got to be a favourite. Although it has to be said that blackmailing himself out of cookies was probably not the wisest of choices, besides, cookies are good, why not buy 15 boxes?
Great story anyway, uber-hot! Keep writing!
What a fun read!
This story had everything - it was funny, warm, erotic and it was just the perfect length because when it was over I wanted more. Great work here.
Damnit now I'm horny AND hungry
Great story! And the best part is Mr. Watts didn't just do it all for the cookie ~ he truly enjoys the church girl. Sweet and dirty always go better together. Thanks for posting this. Gonna have to go read your other work now!
5 great story
love it!!
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