All Comments on 'The Lake Ch. 2'

by britster

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

This was a absolutely amaziing story. I have never gotten this wet from a story. The details were fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
britster, I reiterate my comments from The Lake ch1, and add.

Chapters 1 and 2, would have made a good 2 page start, but only a start. It is really too bad you stopped writing, with a little more maturity and writing experience. Wow, I get wet just thinking about the stories you could write...

lynda.pussy.licker.

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