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Uh oh!!!!
Our girl needs to learn to lock the frackin door!!!!!!! First Chad -- which, worked out really well and now this! Of course, this is ONE way to end a relationship she was looking to end, just not the way she'd planned.
Geez, I am SOOOOOOOOOo addicted to this story!!!! *giggling*
Anyway, *ahem* I think , as I've said, that you've done a great job with Allison's character development; I feel with her and for her. And admittedly, though Roger is rather one dimensional at this point, I feel for Roger right now too. *Hopefully* Roger won't go over the edge and spread this all over town ... then again, Chad *could* come to her rescue and say that Allison had been trying to break it off with him, he took it badly and made up this story so as not to appear like the jilted one.
Anyway ..... love it, love it, love it!!!!
now would be a good time
for roger to take her ouit and fuck the shit out of her ass puussy mouth maybe even have her do some other people for money.... why not use a slut when you have one .. plus make money off it .. dont marry it use it ... after all it is what she wants right
Dear anonymous:
If you don't like the story, or characters or theme ..... don't read it.
And if you have something USEFUL to add .. then do so..... stop being a whining stalker - have at least the guts to list your name. Better yet.... write your OWN story and we can all give you OUR opinions.
Screwed
Don't she have a lock.haha. I agree Roger needs toi fuck the shit out of her,
Don't sweat it
wonderful as always.........
Golden...remember the GOLDEN RULE....you cannot please everyone all of the time...only some of the poeple some of the time...l. but the most important person in life to please is yourself...........
So always be true to YOUR writers heart... write it your way....except small meaningful criticisms... and TO HELL WITH THE REST!!
Those of us that know and love you KNOW you are EXTREMELY TALENTED AT EROTICA !!!
kisses....
T
Keep Going
This is so fucking hot! You've really got this going with Allison. I'm impressed with your ability to maintain variety as well as intensity with her story. Am enjoying this as much as anything I've read on Lit. Thanks.
Gasp!
This is like kinky porn soap opera...loving it!
Free at last!
Finally! Roger gets a glimpse of the true Allison and she'll hopefully be free of the human soporific!
and in case you still check your comments Goldie...I love this tale. I loved Poker Loser too.
OMGOSH
I was waiting for that shoe to drop.... I love your stories not just for the erotic portions but because that are great reads
oh wow!!!
oh oh,i done think the crap has just hit the fan! this should be interesting.
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