All Comments on 'The Rak-Sasha Ch. 09'

That was a quick wrap up. It does sound like there's more to come though. I'm excited to see how the story unfolds!

well this was a cool seris i mean i got confused at the end but still cool but whos Avonaris? is rak-sasha evil ( most likly)? and let hope erica and jake are alright after that enidng and most of all epic nod to liliths shop who knew there in the same unvorise that how i found this from there so hyped to see more

Let me start off by saying that this is by far one of the best things I've read here in a long time as it hit a lot of things I like in these types of stories but is this series ending on sort of an "evil never dies..." paragraph or is there more to come?

Biggest questions I have are: Is Amy and Azetlor still turning into cat beasts and having sex?, and more importantly is Mary cured like everyone else or is she still Ne'Kara because she is still carrying her and Rak-Sasha's child from chapter four? Because Mary becoming a multi-breasted cat demon mother of a litter of cat demons and continuing what Sasha started (maybe becoming a shemale herself to corrupt and impregnate other women in the town) would be a way of continuing the story if you are. Sorry for the long comment but that hanging plot thread at the end of chapter 4 with Mary pregnant is bugging me because it feels like a Chekhov's Gun.

Again I really enjoyed your writing and if this is done I hope to see more from you in the future but it still feels unfinished to me and a continuation would be good too.

Thank you, I can't tell you how much I enjoy hearing that others have found pleasure in my work. As for the series ending, the series may have ended but as you said... evil never dies.

Amy and Azetlor will return in later chapters, you'll find them to be a little different without Sasha involved in their lives. Your question about Mary is an interesting one, demonic possession and pregnancies are tricky situations to deal with. Putting them together adds a whole new layer of complexity, you'll just have to wait and see what happens to her.

I promise you this, you haven't seen the last of Ne'Kara... after all, her mother owns and operates a rather exotic strip club.I'll let you think about that possibility, enjoy!

Very exciting series! Thank you for sharing this hot piece with us.

I really did not care much for the ending Did Baphomet reach through the phone and pull Erica and possibly Jake to where he was at? Your ending is like the famous short story "The Lady or the Tiger" where you leave it up to the reader as to how the story ends. Was Erica's body to be used again to bring a demon back to life as it was the 1st time? If you do continue this story, then you need to let your readers know of Erica's fate. What do Mary and Alex co when they find Erica's room wrecked and she and possibly Jake are missing? I would hope you would resolve this issue in further chapters of this series. Over all an excellent story and I gave you 5-Stars for each chapter. Wardmaster 91D70

Is there any new chapter coming soon or some new stories from you? I really enjoyed your stories.