Wanna know how this will unfold.
great start, can't wait for chapter two.
"Fuck. I fucking new it." Terry growled. Should be "I fucking knew it." Story has potential.
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Interesting.....
Wanna know how this will unfold.
nice
great start, can't wait for chapter two.
nice
great start, can't wait for chapter two.
Proofing.
"Fuck. I fucking new it." Terry growled.
Should be "I fucking knew it."
Story has potential.
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