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Wonderful images.. and alluring words..
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As children of this October’s reign
in birth both tricks and treats will gift
to her the treats so long awaited
to me the tricks of love ill fated
Costumed all as Destiny
A wonderful metaphor here.. I felt the pain and the love that is immortal..
du~
Mentioned in the Sunday reviews..
Deeply moving.
Beautifully conveys how one lives on in others' memories.
It's beauty
touches deep. Haunting and lovely, Vixxx!
Love perpetual...
is expressed in this poem so beautifully. Thank you for the glimpse into your heart's soul.
Very nice, Vixxxy!
Is this a particular form? I found myself reading it over and over, playing with the rhyme and rhythm-- very fun!
It deserves a stronger ending, though!
flyguy
vivid vix
with a tantalizing tail
Short, Sweet, and Lovely
As I read more and more of your writing, I become a bigger and bigger fan. What I find especially interesting, is how your words make me feel different emotions... to me, that is the mark of a great writer.
Images
Weaving images
direct
from mind
to mind
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