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Great Writing!
You set the stage and wove your story excellently. Your descriptions brought the barn and the action to life. I can't wait to read Ch. 02. Bravo!
Excellent as always
I don't usually enjoy descriptive writing but that really did bring the situation to life. I love all your writing and I'm pleased to see this may be a long and very hot series.
Bravo
One of the better written F/m stories on Lit. It was believable and erotic in the play. Just the right balance. Just wish it was longer.
You two can write both M/f and F/m which not everyone can do well. Thank you for the enjoyable tale.
balance
great use of language, your discriptions are enchanting.
A good start
This is a great start but leaves me wanting much more. I wonder if it would have been better to further develop the story before publishing so little of it. But perhaps the author is teasing us....
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