All Comments on 'A Sissy Maid is Born Ch. 01'

You set the stage and wove your story excellently. Your descriptions brought the barn and the action to life. I can't wait to read Ch. 02. Bravo!

I don't usually enjoy descriptive writing but that really did bring the situation to life. I love all your writing and I'm pleased to see this may be a long and very hot series.

One of the better written F/m stories on Lit. It was believable and erotic in the play. Just the right balance. Just wish it was longer.

You two can write both M/f and F/m which not everyone can do well. Thank you for the enjoyable tale.

great use of language, your discriptions are enchanting.

This is a great start but leaves me wanting much more. I wonder if it would have been better to further develop the story before publishing so little of it. But perhaps the author is teasing us....

I loved the fact that he wished for what was happening his whole life , and low and behold he got what he had been wishing for and maybe much much more