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while i like these, they do seem so cookie cutter
so many of these are soo cookie cutter. not much build up, not much variety.
twins - check
one virgin - check
loves it - check
no real guilt - check
i mean really, is there no imagination any more?
so many variations are possible: care for injured, termanally ill virgin, drunk/droogs & later guilty/preggers, forced together by 3rd party, rich and don't care if inpregnant, thrown together by running away, road trip, forced by undercover role playing, ect.
and there rarely seems to be a follow up.
not bad
not a bad story... also don't mind what the other comments say too much... i dunno why if they think they know so much about what a story should be like, they don't write their own.. lol. all i can say is good work and good luck in future stories
encore!
keep writing more!
Screw Mom and Dad (not literally here)
In these stories,the parents always happen to have a weekend away when the kids are discovering sex with each other. Let it be normal like all the other days of the week. If it has to be spelled out, be creative. "That's when you write."
Ooo Sis!
Not quite brilliant - but hot and sexy will do us mere men! Let them do it when parents are close... almost get caught - or get caught!
Lukas
nice but predictable
as u said this is ur first story i really appreciate ur effort but also like to tell u that story waz predictable as always parents going away n stuff like that but story waz nice keep writing u will be soon an expert
It was anly a matter of time
A very tastefully done and this was something bound to happen. When the parents told them they weould be gone for two and a half days, wheels start to turn.
It was anly a matter of time
A very tastefully done and this was something bound to happen. When the parents told them they weould be gone for two and a half days, wheels start to turn.
this is exactly the stuff im looking for!
i loved this story, its great, this is what i look for in a story!
I enjoyed it.
I thought it was a superb little tale, so far. I look forward to reading the rest of it. Thank you for your story.
editor please
un educated writer as usual get a good editor and do a rewrite NOW!!!!
DBRS
Cont. Crit.
"When I went to breakfast my twin sister...." then....
"I am 5 ft 10 in. about 175 lbs. Not muscle bound but by no means overweight. I have short light brown hair and blue grey eyes. Carla is petite at only about 5 ft 1, in and no more than 105 lbs. She is a natural blonde and reaches the top of her shoulders. She has beautiful blue eyes and her tits are small 32A."
Those are totally different appearances, and while fraternal twins are different than identical twins, THEY ARE STILL TWINS AND SHOULD LOOK ALIKE. I know plenty of twins, mostly fraternal, and they DO INDEED look alike.
Besides, isn't the kink of twincest kinda like, you're almost having sex with yourself?
This is just a sister/brother fic. Also several grammatical errors and some spelling.
Good fics get me off because they are written well, and part of writing well is grammar and spelling. I will stop reading in the middle of a fic because it is badly written.
me
that story made me jack off in front of my sister9e4b
Hell awaits
You sick bastard.
What's the problem?
Brothers fucking their sister is lots more common than a worried society and scared parents ever want to know. It's not "sick" (as the idiotic commenter writes), it's totally natural. Up his beloved sister's beloved cunt is where a brother's big stiff cock belongs. A boy blowing his young balls and shooting his creamy sperm up his own sister's twat, painting the walls of his sis's twat a nice milky white, is one of the most beautiful things life has to offer,
one of my favorites
I for one thought it was amazing you my dear have a way with words. Its not so much about the story itself but how you display it and this is onevof the best thank you
-roe
masterbating
when i was 15 my sis was 14 i used to spy on her in bath and wank, then one night i crept into her bedroom put my cock on her lips and spunked up over her face , i didnt even wipe the spunk off, she never said anything the next day,
great story
Try to get an editor or proof read your stuff, though. There were a few typos.
Still love my sis she is 74 I am 75, she still likes it,,
Love the Brother sister sex,,,,
sex with my sister
my sister ask what i want for my birthday whit out thinking i said you she then said you want to fuck me i said yes said ok if that all but only this once so we fuck like rabbits all day
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