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A wonderful thought provoking message Art...I know the story behind the work and that makes it stronger for me. We rush thru life too fast and forget that life can be gone with a whisper... great job! loved this:
I bumped into a Praying Mantis
and we shared a moment of silence,
then I walked away.
Love the animal connections..and the visuals..
thank you for the journey!
Du~
Simply
wonderful! Introspective and reflective. This is the best!
Syn
talk about slamming...
"In order for me to be alive
a day must die"
the whole poem slammed into me. thank you
Thought provoking.
Great reflection upon the time one must take to open their eyes to see what's around them, because life is filled with fleeting moments. Well done!
Just like you...
I squeeze the breath out of each day as if it were Life's orange juice. In this piece, you have expressed a very powerful thought about something we are powerless to control - when the day comes that outlives us. This is excellent food for thought poetry!
Vixxx
nicely done....
....with a nice feel to it. it certainly makes one think about the passing of time. this is my favorite part:
Now I grab the day
by the neck and twist
the life out of it.
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About your work
Your work is wonderfully written, whether erotic or not. I enjoy reading them immensely.
Life is precious
You brought that out immediately. Thank you for allowing your words to stir one's mind. Of how to live..
~L
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