All Comments on 'Cold, Demonic Eyes Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

"The princess had always know, that she had to marry someday "

A little more proof reading, researching proper punctuation use or an editor would be helpful. Should be, "The princess knew" or "had always knowN"(no comma)

"My master wishes you healthy, relaxed and well rested..." he informed her

Like this one, all those ellipsis which should be in place to indicate omitted words, are mostly used incorrectly as well. Should be a period or a comma in most cases.

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