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New Moon Pt. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/08/05

pleased once agian

Once agina youplease me i am still wiaitng for Mom and sons "transfromation" . if you try making it like son all but attacks his mom (bitch in heat) it might work your story is belieavable

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by Moonharp03/19/05

Wonderful...

Wonderful!
As the previous two, this story had a nice edge of eroticism and sexiness, as well as some mystery/fantasy aspect to it.
Cannot wait for continuation...
M

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by turtledove03/25/05

Purfect!

Love the erotic twists and the way you pull me into the story!
Every bit as great as the first two...I can't wait til part 4-Thanks for the read!

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