All Comments on 'That's Not What I Ordered'

by Rmcbar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Helper

Reread what you write before you publish it. Otherwise good work

gotranegotraneover 5 years ago
A Little Confusing

Loved the story, except for one thing. The uniform description says, "black pantyhose", but the encounter says, "black stockings with a garter belt". Love to see more of you and hope that your pantyhose return.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I disagree with the previous pantyhose comment.

The uniform you described is an restaurant industry standard. It brought back a few memories for me! Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
If you would pay attention

If you would pay attention. He realized after she lifted her skirt that she had a garter belt and stockings on instead of pantyhose.

blackknight314blackknight314over 5 years ago
Wow, a good fast whack story.

Assuming that this is a one off story. Who gives a shit if she is wearing black nylons or panty hose. As long as she gets him/me off. OK for a short story.

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