by Soazoldman
Your story is nicely told, well written without typos. More than that, it is a sensuous tale with a great finish.
Nice story.
I can see many happy endings for Dan.
So many great ways to continue on.
There are typos and other errors.
"As a middle-aged man, I definitely needed to stay active and healthy. I planned on living a long time" would make more sense in the present tense, unless you somehow posted this from beyond the grave.
"Weekends are spend doing chores" Spent.
"which was the mostly trigger to her arousal" makes no sense.
"Sandi pulled her mat alongside mine and laid down close to me." Lay down.
But good story, if a little unbelievable.
I am hard just thinking about a group nude yoga experience.
I am looking forward to more chapters.
Nice to read about an older couple's love and sharing. Rare story on this site to feature anyone older than 40.
Thx.