Scott and Melissa Ch. 02

all i can say is...."Wow"

I loved it! the descriptions and everything were just soooo perfect, you really have a knack for storytelling. I especially love anal erotica, and you write about it realistically...unlike some of the other authors on this site who just write the most improbable things that make the story so much less believable. That kind of thing can make or break a story.

This Premise Has A Lot More Mileage

--let's see some more! I don't like to give specific suggestions, which I think is rather insulting to inventive authors, but I can think of some general notions: getting the women into the home, where the wife can watch "live." If the wife can suck cock ("just" not feel her own body below a certain level--admittedly a huge "just" none of us would wish to share), then she should also be able to get in on the action...!

I'm loving this story!!!!