Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'A Murder, A Mystery, A Mistake?'

by phoenixcinders

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This is so well written and intriguing, please keep up with the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More

Don’t leave us hanging.... Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

more more more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent writing

Great writing however it feels like there is a bit too much going on and because of that it feels rushed. If you expanded some parts that would improve the pacing.

BaddGrrlBaddGrrlalmost 6 years ago
I kan haz moar?

Plizz?

mammoetmammoetover 5 years ago
great start

More please

mrsreadermrsreaderover 5 years ago
so much potential

This story needs to continu, please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
CSI episode 100

episode 100 of the original season of CSI is called Ch Ch Changes, has transgender actresses in it i believe

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userphoenixcinders@phoenixcinders
81 Stories
2367 Followers
Hey everyone! You can find Life on the Ranch part 6 published on my website along with all the other sequels. https://phoenixcinderslifeontheranch.gr8.com/ If you want the full story of The Honeymoon, Second Chances, or Virtual Reality follow this link. https://www.amazon.com...