All Comments on 'Long Overdue Time Away Ch. 03'

Aimee, are you so desperate to fuck you have to advertise on a story comment

You need to flesh things out more. The story concept is a good one but each time I read a new chapter it feels like I have skipped the previous 2 or 3 chapters. To get into a story I need to be able to understand the characters and why they make the decisions they do. Here it feels like making love to a skeleton.

Still good reading. Thanks for sharing.