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A Fine Mess Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by DVOL03/10/05

feedback

Love it or hate it? Let me know what you think

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by Anonymous03/11/05

Not very real or entertaining unless consequence

Is braindead wussy husband soon to become aware of cuckolding slut wife and now blackmailing slut sister?

If not, it's just more demeaning pitiful cuckolding by a slut wife - you aren't very original - just as sick as many others here and not entertaining or sensual - just perverted for the few vocal sickies.

You seem to have some talent - why are you writing about male demeaning perversion instead of some other theme which has some sensual arousal in it???? Please consider.

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by Anonymous03/12/05

ok

loved the story but doesnt seem like you really tried to talk down the teen

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by Anonymous05/19/05

ready for part 3

so how long do we have to wait for part 3 when i read your stories i really get into them so lets see part 3

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