by pollyplummer
Well written until you spoiled it with "It felt good to have her laying on top".
What was she laying? Eggs?
The word id 'lying'
Nice sexy story.
And to anon, lying or laying, who cares?
And since you want to be the grammar police, you made a mistake too. It's supposed to be 'is' not 'id'.
This is just about perfect! I love the feelings the relationship and the sex.
Very well written, as usual. I don't know whether it's fiction or autobiography, of course, but the highly detailed description feels very real. Thank you yet again.
She's in love with her visitor but won't tell her.
Very well-written, extremely sensual. women write about sex, especially between to women, so very well. I love as woman well-satisfied by another and have always tried to satisfy any woman I have been with in those ways. (I'm a man)